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02 December 2010 @ 10:14 pm
Two for the Road 17/21  
Title: Two for the Road 17/21
Author: Ink_River10
Pairing: HanChul
Rating: NC-17 (this chapter)
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Angst - AU
Warnings: Swearing, Violence, Sexual Situations
Disclaimer: I do not own Super Junior, I just amuse myself with them in my head
Summary: Hankyung is asked by his powerful boss to do a job for him, but little does he know what he’s really getting into…
A/N: Warning on this chapter - total ridiculous schmoop!

Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 5 Part 6 Part 7 Part 8 Part 9 Part 10 Part 11 Part 12 Part 13 Part 14 Part 15 Part 16


Hankyung stared in disbelief as the doors opened and Heechul came running out. He blinked for a moment, wondering if the heat had caused a mirage, like in the desert. But no, that was no mirage. Kim Heechul was really there, and he was really running top speed down the lawn towards him.

Hankyung let go of the gate as it slid open slowly, watching as Heechul flew towards him. He knew instantly that this was no wild escape attempt. Heechul had really been set free! Hankyung could feel the air in his chest expand, squeezing out all the fear and worry he’d been holding on to for three whole weeks.

The moment the gates opened, Heechul launched himself at Hankyung. They went flying backwards and Hankyung caught him, the velocity of his speed carrying them a few feet and then they fell, a tangle of arms and legs onto the sidewalk.

Hankyung would normally have cried out at the stab of pain from his healing ribs, but nothing mattered, because Heechul was there, kissing him. He could hear him trying to speak through the kiss even though their mouths were fused together and words were useless. Instead all he did was hold on as Heechul kissed him like they were both drowning.

He didn’t even care that they were lying on the sidewalk in broad daylight, he didn’t care that the cement, heated from the sun was slowly burning his back. He didn’t care that the air in his lungs was slowly ebbing away, stolen by the pain in his ribs and Heechul’s mouth.

None of it mattered at all.

Although finally, Heechul dragged himself away to inhale air and look down at Hankyung, sprawled beneath him on the sidewalk.

“Hankyung.” He whispered, and Hankyung reached up to curl his fingers into Heechul’s hair, pulling him down again for another kiss. Heechul complied happily, kissing him back until they were both breathless again.

When Heechul pulled back again, he looked amused.

“If you don’t get me off the sidewalk in the next three minutes, I’m going to rip your clothes off and make you fuck me right here.” He breathed.

Hankyung shook his head, laughing and grabbing Heechul’s arms. He sat up and kissed him again, mindful not to wince as he stood lest Heechul see he was in pain.

“The car.” He managed to say. Half of him was overwhelmed with joy to have Heechul here again with him, and the other half was stunned at how bad Heechul looked. His eyes were bright, but his skin was ghostly pale. He’d lost weight, and he looked almost breakable. And oddly, he was barefoot. “What…” Hankyung began, confused, looking back at the building.

“No…please….” Heechul tugged on his arm, pulling him towards the car. “I can get other clothes and shoes. Just get me out of here…please, I can’t handle it another minute!”

That was all Hankyung needed. He opened the car door for Heechul and then ran around the other side, getting in and fumbling with the keys. Seconds later the car roared to life but then he was being pulled again, Heechul’s lips covering his, sliding his tongue inside, craving, needing wanting.

“Mmpphff…” Hankyung kissed him back, feeling goosebumps break out all over his skin as Heechul’s hand yanked on the hem of his shirt, pulling upwards.

“Now…I need you now.” Heechul exhaled, breaking the kiss and burying his face in Hankyung’s shoulder. He inhaled deeply and Hankyung shivered. “I’ve waited three weeks for this.” Heechul sighed, nipping the sensitive skin of Hankyung’s neck and sliding his hand lower, curling fingers over the steadily building bulge in Hankyung’s jeans.

“Fuck….Heechul…” Hankyung moaned, forgetting (and not caring) that they were parked on the side of the road, making out in the car like two horny teenagers.

Yes…that’s what I want… Heechul purred, crawling over the gear shift and straddling Hankyung. He could feel the steering wheel pressing against his spine, but he didn’t care. He kissed him again, his fingers digging into Hankyung’s shoulders, hard and desperate and demanding. Hankyung kissed him back, gripping Heechul’s waist and rolling his hips out of pure instinct. Heechul threw his head back and moaned. The sight made the hair on the back of Hankyung’s neck stand up and he groaned helplessly as Heechul thrust his hips downward in answer.

Already he was hard and gasping, but Heechul was relentless. It was desperate and hot, and he loved every moment. Heechul’s fingers slid between them, unzipping his jeans and cupping his erection. Hankyung moaned as Heechul stroked him and Heechul grinned like a cat, moving so that he could flex his hand and grip Hankyung’s other hand with his own.

“Here…” Heechul whispered, sending tiny shivers up Hankyung’s spine as Heechul guided his hand downward, wrapping his fingers around him. Hankyung hand moved on it’s own, knowing exactly what to do because Heechul’s hand was doing the same to him. Hankyung heard Heechul’s breath coming shorter and shorter, interspersed with gasps and tiny whimpers that only drove him crazier.

Heechul came first, his whole body shuddering as he buried his face once more in Hankyung’s neck, hacking out a strangled cry that only served to push Hankyung over the edge. He came seconds later, letting go and catching Heechul as he sagged against him.

They sat for a moment in silence, catching their breaths and drifting downwards from the high.

“I love you.” Hankyung whispered, sliding his hands around Heechul’s waist and trailing his fingers up his spine. Heechul hummed in bliss and kissed Hankyung again, this time slower and softer.

“I love you too. Now get us out of here so we can do that again in a bed.” He smiled.

“That’s the best idea you’ve ever had.” He smiled back, but didn’t let go.

“I should sit back down, huh?” Heechul grinned.

“Yeah, I’m good but I can’t drive with a lap full of you.”

“Kyung?” Heechul murmured, leaning in and kissing the curve of Hankyung’s ear. He shivered at the sensation.

“Hmm?”

“Thank you for coming for me.” He said softly.

Hankyung swallowed past the lump in his throat. “Of course I came for you. You’re the Princess and I’m Prince Charming, remember?” He smiled, tickling Heechul’s sides.

Heechul squirmed and laughed, and the sound filled all the holes inside him, rushing through his veins, filling him up and reminding him what it felt like to truly be alive.

“Drive me to our little hotel castle in Sangju again then, Prince. And do it fast.” Heechul smiled, sliding off his lap and back onto the passenger seat.

“Your wish is my command.” He laughed, maneuvering the car back onto the road.

“Oh?” Heechul smiled happily, not giving the building he’d been imprisoned in another glance as they drove away, leaving it behind forever. “That sounds promising.”

~~

Sungwoon stood at the window on the third floor, looking down on the scene unfolding beneath him. Kim Heechul was free. He had known it would happen, and yet it burned and ate at his insides, filling him with jealous hatred and anger. Shindong had ruined his plans, and now it was over. Heechul was free.

He watched in fascinated desire disgust as Heechul knocked over the man standing at the gate and started kissing him. It was revolting and an abomination for two men to do this to each other. It went against nature. Men were supposed to love women and have sex with women. Men were not supposed to kiss each other and fuck each other. He hated the very idea of it. He hated how it made him feel.

Disgusted and angry, he pushed away from the window and looked around for someone to take it out on. But everyone was busy doing something else, and there was no reason for him to be in any of the patients’ rooms right now.

And then he remembered Heechul ranting about his Father being the reason he was there in the first place. A plan began to form in his mind. He might have been cheated of revenge on Heechul here in Busan, but it was about to all come crashing down on him. And maybe he’d get sent back here.

Sungwoon smirked, backing away from the window and the sight of Kim Heechul kissing his boyfriend. He turned and headed for the break room and picked up the phone.

“Can I have the number for WS Enterprises in Seoul?” He asked the operator.

Seconds later, it was ringing.

~~

Kim Ryeowook sat at his desk, reading over the faxed evaluation and release papers that had just arrived from Busan Psychiatric Facility.”

Thank you, Yesung.

Excited and relieved, he picked up the phone and dialed Choi Siwon, but it just rang and rang until Siwon’s voice mail picked up. He waited for the beep and began speaking quickly.

“Siwon-sshi, it’s Kim Ryeowook. I just received Heechul’s release papers. You should call your friend to tell him he’s free to go so he can go get him. Now that I have these, I’m going to file the injunction against Kim Jongdae. This is going to move fast so call me soon, okay? Thanks.”

He hung up and glanced at the phone. He wanted to call Yesung and say thank you, but he couldn’t bring himself to do it. The one conversation had been hard enough.

He looked down at the stack of paperwork and saw the hacked bank account records that Cho Kyuhyun had provided. They felt like a giant smoking gun on his desk, but they were legally useless without a warrant. He should by rights have shredded them the moment that Kyuhyun had walked out the door, but he hadn’t.

Why?

He pulled them out, looking down at them with a mixture of longing and fear. He was holding a piece of evidence that would win him this case, hands down, no contest. He recalled the look of smug satisfaction on Kyuhyun’s boyishly handsome face as he’d handed them over. Oh how he had enjoyed wiping that smug look off his face!

So why had it also been enjoyable to make him smile for real?

Annoyed and feeling spontaneous, he picked up the phone again. He had no idea what he was doing or why he was doing it. He dialed the number and waited as it rang.

“Hello?”

“Is this Cho Kyuhyun?”

“Yeah, who’s this?” Kyuhyun asked warily.

“It’s Kim Ryeowook. Kim Soo Min’s….well…I mean…Heechul’s lawyer.”

“Oh.” Kyuhyun relaxed. “Hi.”

“Hello.” Ryeowook smiled to himself.

“What can I do for you, Wook?” Kyuhyun asked, dropping the honorifics like they'd known each other for years.

Ryeowook gritted his teeth against the unspoken insult of not being addressed correctly. Why did he think this was a good idea again? This guy was rude and cocky and annoying.

“Never mind, I’m sorry to have bothered you.” Ryeowook said briskly. “I’ll call Siwon again.”

“No wait!” Kyuhyun practically shouted. There was a pause as Ryeowook waited. “Don’t call him. What do you need?” he asked, softer this time. “I can help you. Don’t call…Siwon.” Kyuhyun said the name like it tasted bad in his mouth.

Ryeowook took a deep breath and looked down at the papers again. “When you hacked into Lee Yungmo’s bank, was there any kind of trace to it? I mean….did anyone know you got this information?”

“No, I had to hop servers like, fifteen times but no one knew I was there. I got in, got the gold, and BAM! I got out again! Just like a bank robber, baby.” Kyuhyun crowed.

Ryeowook groaned and pinched the bridge of his nose. “Do you even realize that you’re talking to a lawyer here?” He muttered.

“You need to loosen up.” Kyuhyun said, and Ryeowook could hear the grin in his voice. “I was trying to make you laugh. Besides, you like me. You’d never turn me into the police.”

Ryeowook suddenly felt his mouth go dry.

Good God what the hell am I doing?!

“Okay, thank you.” He said hastily, needing to hang up and go pace around so he could think.

“Wait, what? Why did you want to know?” Kyuhyun asked before Ryeowook could slam the receiver down. Ryeowook took a precious moment to breathe, and then spoke again.

“I asked because if Lee Yungmo has any clue that you hacked into his bank accounts, he’d move that money and shut down the account. I’m going to call the DA’s office to get a warrant for the bank account, but it’d be useless if he knew you were in there and already closed the account.”

“Ahh.” Kyuhyun said, and Ryeowook could almost envision the frown lines crossing Kyuhyun’s forehead. He slapped his own face, trying to force the image away so he could concentrate.

Get a grip, Wook.

“Nope, he has no idea. The warrant should get you everything you need. What about the patient complaints I got off his office computer?”

“Those are actually public domain, so those are fine. All complaints are registered on a government website.”

“Oh. Huh. I didn’t know that.” Kyuhyun said, sounding slightly miffed. Ryeowook grinned to himself.

“You didn’t? Oh, well. Now you do.” He felt like fistpumping for that one small victory. “Thanks again, Kyuhyun-sshi. Have a nice day.”

“Ryeowook?” Kyuhyun said, his voice lowering a little.

“Yes?”

“Do you know when Heechul will be able to get out of there? I’m really worried about Hankyung.”

Ryeowook swallowed at the honest tone of concern and care in Kyuhyun’s voice.

“You’ll be happy to know that Heechul’s release papers just came via fax about ten minutes ago. He’s free. I just left Siwon a message, but you can call Hankyung to tell him he can go get Heechul out of there.”

“YES!” Kyuhyun shouted, and Ryeowook laughed despite himself. “Thank you! I’m going to call him right now!”

“Goodbye, then.” Ryeowook smiled.

“You’re the best, Wook. Goodbye!” Kyuhyun yelled happily, and then the line went dead. Ryeowook looked down at the receiver and shook his head.

“I must be out of my mind.” He sighed, but smiled anyway.

~~

It seemed to take hours to get through to someone who would listen to him, but Sungwoon finally reached the man he’d been seeking.

“Who is this?” Kim Jongdae asked sharply.

“My name is Park Sungwoon and I work at Busan Psychiatric Facility.” Sungwoon said, suddenly nervous to be speaking to such a powerful man. There was silence on the other end, so he just began talking. “I thought you should know that your son was released about a half an hour ago.”

“WHAT?” Kim Jongdae roared, and Sungwoon jumped.

“He was released. Some guy was here to get him. They’re gone.”

“Who released him?” Kim Jongdae shouted.

“One of the other doctors. I just thought you should know because--”

But Sungwoon didn’t get to finish, because the line went dead, leaving him standing there holding the receiver and cursing at his second missed chance at revenge.

~~

Heechul lay on his back in the hotel room, naked and completely, totally, happy. Next to him, Hankyung was panting and grinning. They’d driven straight to Sangju and had practically fallen over each other to get to the room. The little ahjumma behind the counter only laughed at them when they walked through the door.

“Ahh, back again I see. You found him?” She asked Hankyung, pointing at Heechul.

“Yes.” Hankyung smiled, holding Heechul’s hand under the counter.

“Good. Don’t lose him again.” She said absently, shuffling around and handing him the key. Hankyung smiled and took it from her.

“I won’t.”

“Good. Same room as before.” She said, and then she was gone, leaving them to run to the room as fast as they could.

That had been four hours ago, and now Heechul could barely move a muscle, but he was so blissfully drunk on the high of being with Hankyung that he didn’t even care.

“Are you hungry?” Hankyung rolled over, propping his elbow on the pillow.

“Starving.”

“Want to get some dinner?”

“No.”

“No?” Hankyung laughed.

“I can’t move. You killed me.” Heechul said fuzzily.

“Ah but what a nice way to die.” Hankyung grinned and poked his side.

“True.” Heechul agreed.

“I can go get us some food and bring it back here.”

“I love that you can read my mind, Hankyung.”

Hankyung laughed. “What do you want?”

“Everything. Bring me everything on the menu. I’ve been eating disgusting hospital food for three weeks. LOOK at me. I’m a skeleton.” Heechul pouted.

Hankyung sat up reluctantly and stretched. “Shut up, you’re perfect.”

“Bring me foooooooood.” Heechul whined, stretching out on the bed and tugging on Hankyung’s arm.

“Okay okay!” Hankyung chuckled and got up. Heechul watched appreciatively as Hankyung walked across the floor, naked and handsome as hell.

GOD I missed you so much.

Just as he was pulling on his jeans and obscuring Heechul’s view, Hankyung’s cell phone rang. Frowning, Hankyung picked it up. Heechul felt a frisson of fear snake up his spine, but then Hankyung smiled. Relief made him flop back against the bed again.

“Kyuhyun-ah! What….yes, I know. He’s here with me right now.” Hankyung laughed. “Yes. Yes, I was there when they released him.”

Hankyung paused to look at Heechul, and suddenly it felt like the air in his lungs constricted tightly. He didn’t want to return yet. He wanted to stay here forever with Hankyung in this tiny little hotel room.

No, not yet. Let’s stay here. Please….

“No, we’ll come back to Seoul tomorrow. We need this. Yes. I know. Tell Ryeowook I said thanks. Yes, I’ll call them. Goodbye, Kyu.”

He snapped the phone shut and looked at Heechul.

“Tomorrow, when I wake up, you’re going to be here, right?” He said quietly. Heechul smiled.

“Yes. Unless I’m dead from starvation.” He rolled over dramatically, flopping his legs and arms over the whole bed.

Hankyung laughed and shook his head. “Brat.” He said, kneeling down and kissing Heechul once more.

“I prefer Princess.” Heechul wrapped his arms around him and kissed him back.

“Okay, Princess. I’ll be back soon with food.” Hankyung said, reluctantly moving away and pulling his shirt over his head. He picked up the key where it had fallen on the carpet and opened the door.

“Hankyung-ah?” Heechul whispered.

He paused, glancing back inside at Heechul. “Yes?”

“I love you.”

Hankyung smiled fondly. He knew he’d never get tired of hearing it. Never get tired of seeing Heechul lying naked on the bed, his skin practically glowing in the soft light above him.

“I love you too.”









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Part 18

 
 
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ink_river10: Heechul Devilink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 03:15 am (UTC)
Spot for my bb static_abyss!!
fall down. get dirty.static_abyss on December 3rd, 2010 03:33 am (UTC)
aws I don't know what happened to the comment. I had a beautiful picture that was my inspiration.
Let me try again and see if this works.



Can you see this?????????
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(no subject) - static_abyss on December 3rd, 2010 03:34 am (UTC) (Expand)
ink_river10: Heechul sexyink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 03:15 am (UTC)
Spot for ukekyu! :)
ukekyu: Half-naked Heenim!ukekyu on December 3rd, 2010 08:33 am (UTC)
Thank you for the prompt update and for the spot, bb :’)… <3…

This is how I went after reading this chapter:

YES YES YES YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS Heechul’s free!!!!!!!!!!! XD

AND

NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO his father found out!!!!! D’X… FUCK YOU, SUNGWOON, FUCK YOU!!!



…okay, now that I let that out… I have three questions for you, bb xD:

1) Why is there NO real explicit sex scene in this chapter TT___TT I have been waiting so much for the after-drama sex and the descriptions that follow every single detail of their intercourse ;____; *deprived of good explicit Hanchul smut*

2) Why is Kyuhyun so fucking cute in this fic ;0? If you don’t hook him up with *someone* (a.k.a. WOOKIE) I’m seriously going to feel like shit for him y___y. Cute boys shouldn’t stay single for long, it’s not healthy XD just hook him up with SOMEONE, please 8D?

3) Why couldn’t that FUCKING SUNGWOON (his name, btw, resembles SungWON, a little too much XD) wait for like a few more freaking hours???!!! u____u FUCK HIM!

Note: sorry for my OVER-emotional questions 8___8 I’m just too engaged in the story, I guess…? To the extent that I want to take out my frustration on someone/something in real life!

But, that doesn’t mean that I was not satisfied with the Hanchul that went on in there 8D it’s just that I was just waiting for action, REAL EXPLICIT ACTION [I’m a Hanchul-smut person Xd]

When Heechul moved on Hangeng in the car driver-seat I went "YES!! car sex XD" What an awkward position, though!
'cause for some reason I imagine Hannie driving something like this baby X;D
(I know, right? LOL)

And, OMG, the Kyuwook phone conversation was priceless XD and are those Wonmin whores still doing it? Pick the phone message, already… LOL

But, then again… I can just imagine what would happen next T____T:

Hangeng is going to return to an empty hotel room, only to find out that Heechul’s father knew where he was and came and took him (How? because of his multiple bitches bodyguards and Hangeng’s parked car!). And Heechul would be taken back to Busan, again… or yet worst… tortured and gang-raped by his father’s personnel !___!....

Sorry, I like to predict things, a little too much XD

It goes without saying that I'm hooked on you... and yes I'm begging for more HANCHUL!!! ;)<3
(...was just listening to Mozella XD)
(no subject) - ink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 05:34 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - ukekyu on December 4th, 2010 12:02 pm (UTC) (Expand)
ink_river10: Heechul Smileink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 03:16 am (UTC)
Spot for tees2mai *waves*
the night is dark and full of terrors: Inspector Wontees2mai on December 3rd, 2010 08:47 am (UTC)
/WAVES LIKE A CRAZY PERSON FROM ACROSS THE MALL YOU REALLY DON'T WANT TO SEE AGAIN.


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That is all.
(no subject) - ink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 05:36 pm (UTC) (Expand)
sweetichigo227: Cute Geng ^^sweetichigo227 on December 3rd, 2010 03:16 am (UTC)
SPOT~
ink_river10ink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 03:26 am (UTC)
I left you one, bb!
ink_river10: Heechul B&W sexyink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 03:17 am (UTC)
Spot for nice_melody :)
ink_river10: Hankyung Icon - Suitink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 03:18 am (UTC)
Spot for sweetichigo227 *WAVES*
sweetichigo227: Happy Gengsweetichigo227 on December 3rd, 2010 03:42 am (UTC)
YAY! a spot for me! x) thank you! ^^ *waves back* :)

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! HANCHUL IS TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *screams at the top of her lungs* YES! xD you have no idea how happy I am! :D i can so see heechul jumping on hangeng at that part! SO CUTE! <3 both hangeng and heechul wouldn't have made it if they had to wait for another day, they NEED each other!

"“If you don’t get me off the sidewalk in the next three minutes, I’m going to rip your clothes off and make you fuck me right here.” He breathed." oh heechul you are still the same... and thats why we love you! <3

SUNGWOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! D:< what the hell?!?! i really hate you! heechul and hangeng have all the right in the world to love each other!!! >:o YOUR JUST JEALOUS! >< Heechul is too good for you anyways! >:( not only him do I not like but I HATE Kim Jongdae too!!! he better not do anything to hurt hanchul! >:o

OMGosh! Hanchul is just too cute! and i love the ahjumma^^ she supports hanchul! :D they are perfect for each other, i don't want them to be separated again T_T
cause THEY LOVE EACH OTHER~

yay!!!! awesome update! ;D can't wait for the next! <3 ;) *runs off to study for test, crying *


(no subject) - ink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 05:38 pm (UTC) (Expand)
ink_river10: Kyu Green shirtink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 03:19 am (UTC)
Spot for hicdanf because I haven't saved one for her in aaaaaages
hicdanfhicdanf on December 3rd, 2010 04:11 am (UTC)
You spotted me! xD I feel so special ^.^

OH MY GOSH! I've just gotta say that the Hanchul reunion was COMPLETELY 100% AMAZING! and perfect and awesome and all that stuff xD

I was definitely not expecting you to throw another curve ball at them with Sungwoon. NO NOW KIM JONGDAE IS GOING TO BREAK THEM APART AGAIN!! Part of me feels sad that they are going to have more hardships to getting to be together, but another part of me is just happy that this wont be ending as soon as I thought! You have no idea how much I love reading this fic! I stalk livejournal everyday waiting for your updates xD

and of course I couldn't comment without mentioning the KYUWOOK! I was definitely spazzing as I read it xD (I'm so pitiful, I know) I can't wait for more of this! They are so cute ^.^

Please update soon! (you know, I think I overuse exclamation points...anyways it just shows you how excited I am every time this is updated xD) Now I think I'll go read this chapter again :P
(no subject) - ink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 05:41 pm (UTC) (Expand)
ink_river10: Siwonink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 03:21 am (UTC)
Spot for convicted_eyes becuase she is writing fic for meeeee! *joy*
convicted_eyesconvicted_eyes on December 3rd, 2010 02:01 pm (UTC)
hell yes I am, now response to this chapter:

-DEAD-

BEYOND A KEYBOARD SMASH MY BRAIN JUST LIKE DIED, CAPUT, SO MUCH CUTE I CAN BARELY HANDLE IT JUST OMG. NOT EVEN THE KNOWLEDGE OF KIM JONGDAE KNOWING HEECHUL IS FREE COULD PUT ME DOWN.
-LAUGHS MANICALLY-
I CANT EVEN CHOOSE FAVOURITE BITS JUST THE WHOLE THING MADE MY HEART EXPLODE WITH COMPLETE AND UTTER FANGIRLY GOODNESS.

EVEN NOW MY HEART IS LIKE SCREAMING 'HAAAAANNNCCHHHUUUUUUUUUULLLLLL' AND I IZ SO HAPPY I DONT THINK I CAN BREATHE!!!

-DIES AGAIN-
(don't worry. ghosts can write.)
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Manaka0907manaka0907 on December 3rd, 2010 03:31 am (UTC)
Mio spot por favor =]
Manaka0907manaka0907 on December 3rd, 2010 03:59 am (UTC)
It's 11pm and believe it or not I'm reading this in the car

I for swear couldnt not look at my father driving for a second or I would just be all >\\\\< OMFG HANCHUL ON THE SIDEWALK IN BROAD DAYLIGHT
I dunno why I find that hot
But still the car smex while I'm in a car hahaha ohh my imagination

-runs around- FINALLY THEY TOGETHER WOOOTTT....... wait wait wat is that fucker doing no no NOOO!!! he CALLED HIM WTF MOTHA AGGHH I could not take this I threw my phone away in the car hitting out gps which scared the SHISUS out of everyone thank god dad has a good reflex or that small little steering mistake would have been ahh not so good result

Hot damn 4hrs in a hotel snaps that was some action going on there XD
No no no no no no u better not make GENG leave and come back to a disappeared heechul again no de-javu women no!!!!!

Awwww kyuwook is so sweet here hehe I just wanna squish them

Awww I just got home must go sleep now why must u update at night XP
thanks for the post and update soon -here's some behind fried rice-
(no subject) - ink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 05:57 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Gabriellaqbunny on December 3rd, 2010 03:48 am (UTC)
SUNGWOON! What a party pooper!
Why the hell would you do that! Shouldn't you expect crazy people to bite your finger? Stupid homophobe.
At least nobody can take Heechul away from Hannie anymore :D
KyuWook ._.
ink_river10: Heechul Oopsink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 05:58 pm (UTC)
Was that a happy KyuWook or a sad KyuWook.....?

Yes, Sungwoon is a homophobic partypooper. *smacks him*

HanChul are together again! :)
ruspring: yesung2ruspring on December 3rd, 2010 04:01 am (UTC)
How perfect! Darn, stupid Heechul's dad. Just leave him alone already! D: Anywyas, thank you for this chapter! I'm looking forward to your next update.
ink_river10: Yesung singingink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 05:59 pm (UTC)
I know, right? It'd be nice if Kim Jongdae left them alone...

Thanks for reading! :)
sujuhappinesssujuhappiness on December 3rd, 2010 05:09 am (UTC)
“If you don’t get me off the sidewalk in the next three minutes, I’m going to rip your clothes off and make you fuck me right here.” He breathed.
- I would so throw myself at Hannie too! and even more so if I'd had a traumatic time in a place for mentally unstable while I was completely sane :)

“No…please….” HeeChul tugged on his arm, pulling him towards the car. “I can get other clothes and shoes. Just get me out of here…please, I can’t handle it another minute!”
He wants to be away... far away from the hell that was the mental hospital.. who cares about retrieving shoes that reminded him of that place.


“Yeah, I’m good but I can’t drive with a lap full of you.”
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

He recalled the look of smug satisfaction on Kyuhyun’s boyishly handsome face as he’d handed them over. Oh how he had enjoyed wiping that smug look off his face!

So why had it also been enjoyable to make him smile for real?

Wookie is starting to find Kyu baby appealing^^ His first impression might not have been the best, but impressed he was :p



“Hankyung-ah?” Heechul whispered.

He paused, glancing back inside at Heechul. “Yes?”

“I love you.”

Hankyung smiled fondly. He knew he’d never get tired of hearing it. Never get tired of seeing Heechul lying naked on the bed, his skin practically glowing in the soft light above him.

“I love you too.”

I love how they are now professing their love to each other more openly... going through hardships together does that to people... they must feel that they can't let an instant go without affirming their feeling for each other, because life is short and sometimes cruel.
ink_river10: HanChul Iconink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 06:02 pm (UTC)
Yes, Wookie is finding himself thinking about Kyuhyun WAY TOO MUCH, in his opinion. But I love it! :)

Yes, Heechul and Hankyung have been through too much together not to be open about how much they love each other now. Tsk'awww. *hugs them*

Thanks for reading, bb! I'm glad you still like the story and are sticking with me. :)
tinggi22tinggi22 on December 3rd, 2010 06:06 am (UTC)
I love you.....

only three simple words..but those words melted my heart over and over again...

hanchul happiness..oh, I can feel it too and now I relive with joy..

you rock man or girl for make it so wonderful..
ink_river10: Nakie!Hanchulink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 06:04 pm (UTC)
LOL - I am so not a man! (But DAMN it would be fun to be one for a day or two!)

Thanks for the comment, I'm also very happy that they're together once more!
yesalmen: heechul b&wyesalmen on December 3rd, 2010 06:10 am (UTC)
this chapter was...SO FREAKING AWESOME,
KJNFGVHDFBVIFJGJKFBVIUFNHBGJNBJHGCNLCGNCJKGLNKLGNMKLBVMNKLMBKLNMVKLBMNLKMBKLNMVBKLMN...well, i didn't want to say bad words so I write that hahahah

I know you write so well---I told you before--- but I didn't expect you could made this story so GOOD (and it was perfect before but now what word I can use).

-->The moment the gates opened, Heechul launched himself at Hankyung. They went flying backwards and Hankyung caught him, the velocity of his speed carrying them a few feet and then they fell, a tangle of arms and legs onto the sidewalk.---->OHHH GOSH THAT PART...I LOVE THAT PART

--->“If you don’t get me off the sidewalk in the next three minutes, I’m going to rip your clothes off and make you fuck me right here.” ---> I WSIH I COULD SEE THAT HAHAHAHHA

--->“Now…I need you now.” Heechul exhaled, breaking the kiss and burying his face in Hankyung’s shoulder. He inhaled deeply and Hankyung shivered. “I’ve waited three weeks for this.” Heechul sighed, nipping the sensitive skin of Hankyung’s neck and sliding his hand lower, curling fingers over the steadily building bulge in Hankyung’s jeans.---> NOSEBLEED NOSEBLEED AND NOSEBLEED

--->“Thank you for coming for me.” He said softly.
Hankyung swallowed past the lump in his throat. “Of course I came for you. You’re the Princess and I’m Prince Charming, remember?” He smiled, tickling Heechul’s sides.---> OF COURSE HANKYUNG IS THE PRINCE AND HEECHULERA IS HIS PRINCESS

--->Are you hungry?”
“Starving.”
“Want to get some dinner?”
“No.”
“No?” Hankyung laughed.
“I can’t move. You killed me.” Heechul said fuzzily.
“Ah but what a nice way to die.” Hankyung grinned and poked his side.
“True.” Heechul agreed.---> I AGREE, THAT'S A WONDERFUL WAY TO DIE HAHAHAH

--->“Bring me foooooooood.” Heechul whined, stretching out on the bed and tugging on Hankyung’s arm.
“Okay okay!” Hankyung chuckled and got up. Heechul watched appreciatively as Hankyung walked across the floor, naked and handsome as hell.
GOD I missed you so much.---> HERE TOO, NOSEBLEED NOSEBLEED NOSEBLEED

--->“Hankyung-ah?” Heechul whispered.
He paused, glancing back inside at Heechul. “Yes?”
“I love you.”
Hankyung smiled fondly. He knew he’d never get tired of hearing it. Never get tired of seeing Heechul lying naked on the bed, his skin practically glowing in the soft light above him.
“I love you too.”---> THAT PART WAS SO ROMANTIC HANCHUL DEFINITELY LOVES EACH OTHER (*happy*)

SO ...I LOVE THIS CHAPTER (screaming loud ,I don't care my mom is sleeping, my time zone: 1:07 am)

thank you for your hard work I appreciate it...you make my day ^___^


ink_river10: Heechul sexyink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 06:07 pm (UTC)
*giggles*
I think we'd ALL pay to see that scene in the car or be a fly on the wall in that hotel room! *fans self*

I loved it when you were like: Nosebleed Nosebleed Nosebleed

Heeehee! What a fantastic comment! I love that, as strange as that sounds!

Thank you for this comment! *hugs you* I loved it! :)

Maddy Pertiwitentangmaddy on December 3rd, 2010 09:02 am (UTC)
I have to cover my mouth because I almost screaming so much. It's probably my most favorite chapter so far :)

Heechul free, Hankyung came and then the little scene between them in the car,,, GOSH!!! So hot!!! They really didn't waste any time, did they? ^^

That Sungwoon,,, Let strangle his neck!!! Now what will happen to them now that Kim Jongdae knew about Heechul's freedom.

Love you always and waiting for the next chapter hehehe.
ink_river10: Kyu Green shirtink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 06:09 pm (UTC)
I think if all my readers were to gather together they would have torches and pitchforks like an angry mob to go after Kim Jongdae and Sungwoon!

Thanks for the comment, bb! I hope you don't mind I didn't save you a spot this time, I am trying to shake it up between chapters for other folkses.
(no subject) - tentangmaddy on December 4th, 2010 04:52 am (UTC) (Expand)
FollowUrDestiny: HanchulTwinsfollowurdestiny on December 3rd, 2010 09:30 am (UTC)
This is too sweet... and hot XD... an explosion of love XDDD... the KyuWook :D made me smile, there's potential there... still I feel that something bad is still coming *why?!!* XXDD

<333
ink_river10: Heechul Oopsink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 06:10 pm (UTC)
AAHHAHAHAHA Because I have trained you so well to expect that nothing good happens without something bad coming directly afterwards!

/EVIL

Seriously though, thanks for the comment, I am happy you haven't given up on me through SEVENTEEN chapters of this thing!
acchan |あっちゃん: Hanchulhibinoasami on December 3rd, 2010 09:53 am (UTC)
/bawls

HE IS FREE~!!

NOW YOU WILL GATHER THE FORCE TO FIGHT THAT OLD BASTARD, RITE? RITE? RITE?????? *______*
ink_river10: Heechul Devilink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 06:11 pm (UTC)
*giggles* For a moment there I had an image of the Star Wars Rebel Force going after Kim Jongdae with light sabers to KEEEL HIM! LOL

We'll just have to wait and see what Kim Jongdae does....


/tease
(no subject) - hibinoasami on December 4th, 2010 09:08 am (UTC) (Expand)
catherine_leitecatherine_leite on December 3rd, 2010 10:52 am (UTC)
I love this chapter!and i love the writer for this! lol...
i'm gonna make it short, i'm glad that they finally managed to be together... even though, i think,they'll have other problems ahead but at least they face it together.. soooo sweet!!!!!!
i spot upcoming kyuwook! :D
i almost wanted to ask you who the heck is sungwon, but then i remembered!he's the one heechul bit,wasn't he??
anyway.always love this story.keep them coming bb!
ink_river10: Heechul Oh really?ink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 06:12 pm (UTC)
Yes, Sungwoon is the orderly that Heechul bit his finger. STUPID MAN! He's just jealous and a homophobe. >:(

But thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked this chapter. :)
wal_kinawal_kina on December 3rd, 2010 03:00 pm (UTC)
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG This is what i want!!!!!!!

This super sexy couple~~~


I want Hankyung could kill me like he did with Heechul tooooooooo >///<

and I want to see naked Heechul rolling in my bed toooooooooo >w<~

Thanks Sungwoon for all of your fucking stupid jealousy!!! you'll pay for it!
ink_river10: HanChul holding handsink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 06:14 pm (UTC)
Right?! I think ALL of us would love Hankyung killing us with sex and being able to see Heechul rolling around naked on a bed. HAHAHA!

I'm glad you liked this chapter! Thanks as always for commenting! *hugs*
tokidoki_samatokidoki_sama on December 3rd, 2010 06:06 pm (UTC)
Oh! Such a quick update! You're truly a gift to fandom! =D ♥

This was such a sweet chapter! I'm so glad that Heechul and Hankyung are back together! But I was sorta disappointed with the way they were reunited... not that it's any fault of yours as the author, but more due to the fact that the first thing they do after an ordeal a big as what they just went through is jerk each other off... the more romantic part of me wants Hankyung to worry over Heechul first with, "are you ok?" like stuff (basically treating him like glass) before they get all excited and what have you. Mainly because that to me seems more like love and jerking off first seems more like pent up lust to me. But like I said it's personal prefrance and who doesn't like seeing Hanchul enjoying each other? XD LOL

But OMGosh... you have no idea how excited I am for possible Kyuwook development!!!! asd;flkjasdofiuasdflkjsad;lfjasd;lfjasd (is biased) It's my OTP didn't you know? XD LOL I love your characterization of Kyuhyun! So often I read him as cold and quiet or just plain mean. But you've given him much more character! =D I love it! And wookie... don't get me started on wookie!!! (He's my Suju bias didn't you know? XD)

So yeah... and awesome update! I love this fic! I love you! I want to say I love other things but I can't think of any other nouns to put in there so just know that I'm feeling a lot of love right now I'm just too incoherent to express myself... XD
ink_river10: Heechul Oopsink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 06:23 pm (UTC)
Y'know, it's interesting that you said this, because I wanted to write it that way. But I started writing it, and they were like, all over each other and I couldn't make them focus! It was crazy! Sometimes I start writing a scene with one idea in mind and then the characters themselves kidnap it and run off with it! That's what happened there in the car.

I'm glad you like my characterization of Kyuhyun. You're right, I DO see him written cold and cruel, and I just can't do that. I think he CAN be mean, but not all the time. I think most of the time, he's ridiculously shy and comes off as distant and cold.

I LOVE KIM RYEOWOOK. I seriously love our Wookie. I think he is the sweetest, most adorable man on the planet! I have a million other stories in my head with Wookie in them. As soon as 2ftR is done, I am going to write like, a kajillion more stories. :)

Thank you again for the thoughtful comment! And yes, I DO agree with you that it was strange to not see them being worried about each other but Heechul took off like a bottled up hurricane and no matter what I did I couldn't stop him! I finally gave up and did what he wanted me to do. LOL
(no subject) - tokidoki_sama on December 3rd, 2010 06:31 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - tokidoki_sama on December 3rd, 2010 06:54 pm (UTC) (Expand)
shining_star15shining_star15 on December 3rd, 2010 08:20 pm (UTC)
And then he remembered Heechul ranting about his Father being the reason he was there in the first place. A plan began to form in his mind. He might have been cheated of revenge on Heechul here in Busan, but it was about to all come crashing down on him. And maybe he’d get sent back here.


OOOOHHH NOOOOO! I'm in the middle of reading this and I'm omging at this line. That Sungwoon is evil.


i love this fic, more please?)
ink_river10: Heechul sadink_river10 on December 3rd, 2010 11:58 pm (UTC)
Aww thank you! Yes, Sungwoon is an evil idiot. JERK!

More fic soon, I promise!
oh baby, im a weasley ♡: dangerous cinderellamimoiikit143 on December 4th, 2010 02:35 pm (UTC)
*points at Sungwoon*
Seriously your getting revenge for someone who bit your finger? What are you threee?
Dammit! I bet Jongdae is rushing like crazy to get those two torn apart again!
Why must you ruin all the fuuuun? xD
Uwaaaa, HanChul sex is the best in the world..i don’t even! ;)
And doing that after 3 weeks of being apart is just the best way to celebrate!^^
Oh what am I talking about? Anyways im definitely loving KyuWook right now!
They are so darn adorbs <3
Lourdeslourdesita14 on December 4th, 2010 10:50 pm (UTC)
I don't know why I have a bad feeling about Hankyung leaving Heechul alone in the hotel, specially now that his father know that he is free.....I hope I'm wrong lol
ftino1 on February 12th, 2013 01:44 am (UTC)
4 more chapters to go, and I'm barelt finding out the genre says: DRAMA, ANGST. Ok this is first and last time I read something without checking everything other than the pairing ;A; (but I will never regret reading this. This is hands down my favorite HanChul fanfic EVER)

I feel numb. I don't know how to feel anymore. Everythin in this chapter was perfect. Except for that little SUNGWOON FUCKER OMG I WILL STRANGLE HIM I WAS ONLY A BITEN FINGER STOP BEING A LITTLE WHINNY BITCH sorry for my rant. I needed to let it out.
ink_river10: Heechul Devilink_river10 on February 12th, 2013 04:12 am (UTC)
Awww that's so sweet of you! Favorite HanChul fic ever? *preens* That's a really nice compliment. Thank you!

Go ahead and virtually punch Sungwoon. It'll make you feel better.
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